Alrighty, this is just a way for me to get feedback/gauge how much interest this has. People, the last one was a bit shaky, so any criticism would be good. This is your chance to tear me apart! xD On another note, the starting sequence was a major piece of shit - when it comes to PbP's, I realize it needs to be more structured and linear as opposed to a highly opened and vague area for the players to explore that their leisure, so that has been changed! (unless of course you want that, but I find it can drag the story very slowly, however I will listen unto your whims!